Terrible Contest draft....

Okay this is a quicky draft for Japanese festival contest, it doesn't fit I don't think but I came up with this on the fly to maybe get some feedback on what I might need to change. The image above shows Kenju (left stick person) reaching out to his love , Orahime (on the right) who is on the other side of the Milky Way river, se is also crying and reaching out to him, she is under a Sakura tree, which has petals falling from it. Kenju has his sheep in the background , I couldn't decide if I should add dark clouds to the sky to make it more sad or not. suggestions?